FOR EOIN MACKEN!

HEY MR. MACKEN!

Thanks for giving me this chance! I really appreciate it. I love writing and I'm a amateur. Though, every time I write, I just want to entertain people and by you being open to ideas... well thanks! (I'm so sorry, I'm just very, very excited for this chance). 

So... I want to apologize for the grammar mistakes. I'm a Colombian, so my first language is SPANISH.

If you like them, go ahead! USE THEM! Just... let me know if you need help with the script or any other help I can give you from across the world (Sorry, I'm in Colombia). 

WRATH:

There’s this kid (let’s call him X) at middle school that his classmates tell him some nickname. He hates this nick name. So, one day, one of his classmates (let’s call it Y) starts bullying him with this nickname and X tries to be very, very patient with this classmate. Though, Y starts being very aggressive with the insults, so X loses control. They start fighting and X is so mad (like real crazy) that he starts hitting and hitting him so hard. At the end, he breaths heavily and realizes that he has kill him during the fight.   

GLUTTONY:

(This one is quite stupid but it’s a real situation)

Once there was a girl that was preparing to become a dancer. Her parents had signed her up on some ballet classes. She was accepted with one condition, she must lose 5 kilograms (10 pounds). She agreed. During her process, one day she was at class and she did a grand jeté. When she arrived to the floor, she got her knee twisted and she was taken to the hospital. There, doctor told her that she must rest for one month. So, she was so depress about it, that she started to eat junk food. It didn’t matter that she felt full, she just ate. At the end, she gained the double of the weight she must lose for the ballet classes, and she could never dance again. Her body wasn’t the same when she lost all the weight.

ENVY:

There’s this beautiful girl (Let’s call her Y) at College. She is very sweet, intelligent, good looking, humble...  and she has this friend (Let’s call her W). Though, W is a beautiful girl, their personalities are the opposite. So W is always wishing Y the worst things ever; in fact, she just hangs out with Y because Y is popular. One day, Y is talking and kissing with a good looking guy and W sees them. W asks Y about him and Y tells her that is a guy that she likes a lot but there’s nothing serious between them. Though, W knows there will be something serious. So, she tries to do everything to gets his attention and she does. During a collage party, W tells the guy that Y has a boyfriend. So the guy feels so bad about it that goes to talk to Y. He’s angry, so he doesn’t allow Y to speak. He leaves and Y is crying, feeling so bad about it. Days after, Y sees W with the guy and realizes that W is not a good friend. Finally, one day, W sees Y kissing a guy and she feels angry and the need of steeling this guy from Y.    

I'm really, really, scared about it, because I'm very preppy and it's not what you generally write, but... if you want to do feed back, it's OK for me, I'm like a sponge. 

I'm still thinking of Sloth, Pride and Avarice... though I must go to receive my graduation gown. So.. if you see it during this period of time, I will be writing you my ideas about Sloth, Pride and Avarice this....  for me night, for you day. 

HOPE YOU LIKE IT!